Argument About Why We Should Have Longer Play-times.

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Here at NBC we think that the playtimes are too short and we are here to tell you what we think about it … 

Even the news letter from edutopia was talking about how we should have longer break times this is their newsletter. Longer breaks such as recess or playtime provide opportunities for children to learn important life skills. Research shows that when children play together, they learn how to take turns, resolve conflicts, and solve problems. They also learn how to manage their own emotions and behavior, fundamental skills for life. And if we have longer break time the teachers will have longer to talk and eat before we come in. 

We should because it could make us more healthy and more fit so that is one reason and another reason is that we actually have more fun at school cause sometimes school is very very boring. So we deserve it.

The Evidence is This 

Because I'm bored of not getting enough play time + we can get more exercise.

We want longer break time because 15 Minutes really is that all we get for morning tea we should at least have 30 minutes for starters it's more exercise and the and the recommended time is 20 and over we also need time because maybe some of us might get keeped inside for a bit and get out there when the music goes. I'm not saying that the people who have been behaving bad should get all the lunch time and not get a punishment im saying they should only miss 1 to 5 minutes and then they still get time to play 

If you came to this school what would you want 15 minutes of playtime at morning tea or 30 minutes. 

Don't you wanna have time to play or talk not just come outside and walk back in again

So if those reasons did not persuade you I don't know what will. BUT you have to at least consider changing it, think about it youll have longer breaks too. That's me done talking

Goodbye

• The kids of Room 3 NBC