We had to write a cool paragraph that would make the reader be able to visualise what I was writing about.
This is my first paragraph:
Hope you enjoyed.
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Hi Alfred its Joe i really like your stairway to heaven story its very cool and funny its the best.
ReplyDeletethank you Joe i hope you have a good day and have fun.
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