WALT:write a short description about the picture below.
It was a valley of desperation. Overgrown leaves and vines torn over the buildings and streets.
It seems as if this world was rid of people many years ago.
Towers are abandoned and like slime like creatures are growing weeds everywhere!
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Kia ora Alfred. What a start to your description. I love the imagery of a 'valley of desperation.' It would be good to include a question to engage your readers and start a dialogue.
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