I looked at these animals. Where had they come from? What were they doing?
Questions, questions, oh why do we have so many questions in our brain all the time.
I mean it’s not your everyday scene especially considering there's no humans.
Then it hit me, no seriously just then the Orangutan threw some fruit at me,
but because of that Orangutan I realised that the people had turned into animals. Does that mean that I am the last man on earth. Oh gosh that's a lot to take in, especially considering there was three meerkats, one zebra, one bear, one giraffe, a lion, parrot, koala and an Orangutan. As I approached I saw grief in the lion's eyes!
Then the parrot spoke up ¨come on out¨. Out of the door came a bear ¨hello¨ he said. looking in the mirror. The zebra blew off. ¨oh zebra when ill ye learn ta control ye buttox¨ repied the cow. ¨And uh sorry i’m late. I accidentally angered the farmer by punchering his front right tire.¨
¨Oh and by the way you might want to separate those meerkats they're arguing again.¨
Orangutan turned down the volume on his radio.
¨what was that sorry i’m going deaf¨.¨Really youŕe deaf¨ replied the giraffe.
¨Yum¨ said the koala
¨Seriously that's way of the topic koala¨ replied giraffe
¨Um I gotta go¨ interrupting their delightful dialogue.¨so see ya¨.
Hi Alfred. It would be strange to be the last man on Earth. I like how you have used speech marks and new lines to show dialogue. Next time remember to check the formatting before you post. If we all turned to animals what would you like to be?
ReplyDeleteA tiger how about you?
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