Wednesday, 13 May 2020

Haunted place above/below a cliff.

WALT:Redraw and read the description, then post to blog.
I had to draw a scene then read a description about it. So that's what I did.
and then I had to read it.

over all I think I did pretty well.
Maybe I could have moved to a quieter place.
Tell me if there is anything I can improve.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Alfred. Great to see your DLO's. This makes for an interesting post that grabs my attention. I like your reflection and think we could hear you clearly so your spot was OK. Next time it might be good to zoom in on the picture so I can really see the detail.

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  2. OK thank you. I will try doing that next time.

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