Wednesday, 27 May 2020

My very long narrative.

WALT:write a narrative.
One day on a dark gloomy day there was a person named jason.
Jason loved to play football. So he came out of his home-made
pitch, and saw the most deceiving, disgusting thing ever:
A bat with a rat in his mouth, and inside the mice's mouse there
was a slice of cheese with several little ants on them.Stunned,
Jason ran away determined to never look back or return.
Little did Jason know that was an extraordinary sight as they
could actually form a ball of water and just move around
disguised. Jason had just encountered some actual Alien
technology.

The bat-cheese-mouse-ant thingy formed into water and was
heading straight for a drain pipe this could potentially be the
most deadly thing ever…


The military forces heard of this and got all of their arsenal*
(to hear about the meaning of arsenal please go to the bottom of
the post, or use a dictionary.) and other military weapons out
and ready.
(Which is not  a good idea because it can turn to water.
So that’s not going to help whatsoever). Little did they know
that the monster like creature was already attacking them...
Within their food.

The next night 100 men fell dead from the beast-like creature’s
special food poisoning that would kill a man within an hour.

The next night no one ate a thing. They knew that if they carried
this on they would starve to death. So instead they got the
scientists, doctors, and medics all to study this poison,try
to find out how it was happening and find an antidote.
These people were potentially holding the whole of the human
race in their hands. The next night everyone was eager to find
out the antidote, but the nether of the medics, scientists  or
doctors could do anything. This was a disaster…


By now the monster was on hay up the empire state building.
If he got to the top and reached the clouds he could spread his
deadly poison across the world killing every living life-form. 


The next morning the doctors heard (on the news) that the
deadly poison had been spread! This had pulled their last straw.
The doctors knew that they had to spring into action…
and that’s exactly what happened. They got off their bottoms
and went to find an antidote. Unfortunately they couldn’t find
an antidote. But they thought that maybe the only way to stop
this pandemic was by preventing it. So instead they let all the
people die to stop the risk of anyone else getting hurt. So they
made a robot that could suck up the water and slowly dry it so
that it would slowly vanish. The president thought this was an
excellent idea and was worth a shot. They would send armed
soldiers so that the monster had to turn into water. This was a
brilliant idea. So they went… to the café to get their morning
coffee. Then quickly slurped it up and went to the place that
they presumed the beastly, monster-like creature would be
lurking.


They were right, the monster was lurking exactly where they
thought he might be… The middle of Peru. They sent their
¨special¨ robot to Peru with half an army, ((Peru’s permission.)
Obviously.) and one heavy loaded military army tank! They
located the beast and just followed it. The tank shot a missle
and it hit probably exactly where it’s target used to be.
(before he turned to water.) This was great because it meant
that he was in ¨water mode¨ and perfect for the dehydration
robot to attack.  set the robot laon full speed and locked him on
to the target.(AKA the beastly, monster-like creature that’s
spreading a pandemic and killing millions of people.)


The robot worked perfectly, and the beastly, monster-like
creature was gone! The world was saved. Hooray. 


The next day the doctor who had come up with this robot was
named mad’m and the world went crazy with relief.(especially
Jason.)


The End

Arsenal*means military equipment and weapons.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Alfred, my name is Lily-Rose from New Brighton Catholic School. I REALLY love your narrative about the monster thingy. It is AMAZING! You have obviously put lots of detail into it. Next time could you please make the text a bit smaller? It was hurting my eyes. But apart from that, IT WAS AMAZING!!! What made you think to do a story with that topic?

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